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장지혁/2024-02-22

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I think so too. I can help poor old people or people who have diffcult to move. They can be happy.
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Hello, Henry!
That's a wonderful idea! Helping those in need, especially the elderly or people with mobility difficulties, can bring immense joy and fulfillment to both them and you. Your willingness to lend a hand is truly admirable. 
~ Teacher Maxine 

I think so too. 
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I feel the same way.

I can help poor old people or people who have diffcult to move. 
>> I can help poor elderly individuals or people who have difficulty moving.

They can be happy.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> They could experience happiness.
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