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김지숙/2024-02-22

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I want to work in Korea when I grow up because Korea is comfortable and comfortable as I keep coming to life.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
It's great that you have a positive perspective on working in Korea and find it comfortable, Eric.  Keep exploring opportunities and working towards your goals! Have a happy weekend. ^^
~T.Harmony <3

I want to work in Korea when I grow up because Korea is comfortable and comfortable as I keep coming to life.
>>  I aspire to work in Korea when I grow up because I find it comfortable and fulfilling, and I've grown attached to the lifestyle there.
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