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When was the last time you streamed a movie, and what streaming service did you use?

서지연/2024-02-22

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The last time I streamed a movie was 2 weeks ago and I used Disney Plus. I enjoyed 'Elemental' which i already watched in the theater before. It was interesting that I felt different emotions compared to the first time.
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Here's your edited homework, Liz!
Thank you for uploading it! 

Cheers,
Jean~~







                          When was the last time you streamed a movie, and what streaming service did you use?



The last time I streamed a movie was 2 weeks ago and I used Disney Plus. 
>> OR: The last time I streamed a movie was about a couple of weeks ago on Disney Plus. 

I enjoyed 'Elemental' which i already watched in the theater before. 
>> I enjoyed Elemental, which I already saw at the theater when it was released. 

It was interesting that I felt different emotions compared to the first time.
>> It was interesting that I felt different emotions compared to the first time I saw the film.
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