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What is your best people/ interpersonal skill?

천세은/2024-02-22

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I would say good communication skills and open minded to new cultures and changes. I try to understand people even in an uncomfortable situation. Also, I catch people's needs fast with my sharp eyes, and address the needs for their comfort.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Good evening, Rachel!

This is all what it takes and all that you need to be a top class cabin crew. All these skills are a result of your handwork and dedication to your career. Continue honing your skills and talents. 

You did a great composition! As you as see, there are only  a few words missing to complete your first sentence. 

See you again tomorrow.

-T. Donna~

I would say good communication skills and open minded to new cultures and changes.
>> I would say good communication skills and open minded to new cultures and changes are my best skills.

I try to understand people even in an uncomfortable situation.
>> Correct!

Also, I catch people's needs fast with my sharp eyes, and address the needs for their comfort.
>> Correct!

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