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What do you dislike the most about airports?

호경윤/2024-02-22

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I cannot understand about policy to limit quatities of liquid. That wasn't before. As I know, the policy has decided after 9.11 terror in US. US make the rule, and then US order to whole world. Once I had bad memory about that. When I trasfered at San Francisco airport, there were some problems in my airplane. So I had to sleep over nearby hotel, and check-in again. I couldn't bring my new skin-tonic(big size) what I bought in the duty free shop yesterday.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
I am so sorry to hear about this frustrating experience, Kyeong Yun.  I agree, I also don't understand why there's a limit but maybe it is for the safety of all. ^^
-Khai
I cannot understand about policy to limit quatities of liquid.
>> I cannot understand the policy about the limit of the liquid.
That wasn't before.
>> It was not being implemented before.
As I know, the policy has decided after 9.11 terror in US. 
>> What I know is that the policy was implemented after the 9/11 terrorism attack in the US.
US make the rule, and then US order to whole world.
>> The US made the rule, and then it was implemented around the world.
Once I had bad memory about that. 
>> I had a bad memory about that.
When I trasfered at San Francisco airport, there were some problems in my airplane.
>> I transferred at San Francisco airport, and there were some problems with the airplane.
So I had to sleep over nearby hotel, and check-in again. 

>> So, I had to sleep-over at a nearby hotel, and check-in again.

I couldn't bring my new skin-tonic(big size) what I bought in the duty free shop yesterday.

>> I couldn’t bring my new skin-tonic which is in a big bottle that I bought in the duty-free shop yesterday.


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