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김순님/2024-02-22

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Memorable graduation is, first, eating out many people with her. Second,cake is necessary. some people prepare the lettering balloon decoration. And hand writing card from parents. Last allowance is considered by present. They could buy what they want to have their usual.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Good morning, Ms. Sunny!
How was your son's graduation day?
You wrote here an example of a memorable graduation, how about yesterday? was it memorable also for your son? tell me about it later.
See you.
T. Aki~


Memorable graduation is,
>>> CORRECT!

first, eating out many people with her. Second,cake is necessary.
>>>  First is eating out with many people with the person and cake is necessary.

Some people prepare the lettering balloon decoration.
>>> Some people prepare decorations like balloon letters.

And hand writing card from parents.
>>> And a written card from parents.

Last allowance is considered by present.
>>> The last allowance is considered a present.

They could buy what they want to have their usual.
>> They could buy what they want like the usual.

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