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장지혁/2024-02-21

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I agree with Logan's opinion Because I think when I grow up Imay not have time to learn something. Peaple had better learn insrtrument for experiance.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Henry!

Learning an instrument can indeed provide valuable experiences, and it's something I'll consider for my future.

~ Teacher Maxine

I agree with Logan's opinion Because I think when I grow up Imay not have time to learn something.

>> I agree with Logan's opinion because I think when I grow up, I may not have time to learn something.

Peaple had better learn insrtrument for experiance.

>> People had better learn an instrument for experience.