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In two sentences, what is your preferred mode of transportation, and why?

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I have been driving for 30 years and I usually go to somewhere by my car.
Sometimes I take a subway or bus go to downtown or a long distance.
I prefer take a bus mode of transportation ,beacase there is bus station whthin a two-minute distance.

T.EZRA
Thanks your detail explain.
This moring I could'nt understand
"What should'nt I miss "after class I searched the dictionary.
Thank you once again.

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Hi, Grace! I see! I hope I can drive my own car someday too. I actually know how to drive, but I¡¯m not that confident yet—so I can only imagine how skilled you must be after driving for 30 years!

Taking the bus is also common in my area since we have a bus terminal nearby, although it¡¯s not within walking distance like the one you have.

Thanks a lot for doing the assignment. It¡¯s good! There are just a few minor grammar slips, but there¡¯s always room for improvement. Keep familiarizing yourself with the corrections.

Great job—nice work! 
~ T. Ezra 


I have been driving for 30 years and I usually go to somewhere by my car.
>> I have been driving for 30 years, and I usually go places by car.
Sometimes I take a subway or bus go to downtown or a long distance.
>> Sometimes, I take the subway or a bus to go downtown or travel long distances.
I prefer take a bus mode of transportation ,beacase there is bus station whthin a two-minute distance.
>> I prefer taking the bus as a mode of transportation because there is a bus station within a two-minute walk.

T.EZRA

Thanks your detail explain.
>> Thank you for your detailed explanation.
This moring I could'nt understand 
"What should'nt I miss "after class I searched the dictionary.
>> This morning, I couldn't understand the phrase "What shouldn't I miss?" After class, I looked it up in the dictionary.
Thank you once again.
>> CORRECT

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