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How do you usually decide when to save money and when to spend it?

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2025-04-22 11

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now a days i want to buy many things.
but i don't buy everything. becuase my money and property is limited.
so i think, 'this thing is really need to me?...'
example same as plastic models, clothes, and watches..
these things are just types of hobby, not necessity. so i buy after i think for one~two month.
but i don't save money eat things.
if i want to eat something, i eat it.
because i feel good when i want to eat food.

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Hello, Hun!
Thank you for doing your homework. It's the same for me. When it comes to luxury items or things that are not really needed, I think about whether to buy them or not, but when it comes to food, I willingly spend money on it because I believe that good food is like a reward for my hard work.
- T. Caitlyn 
now a days i want to buy many things.
>> Nowadays, I want to buy many things.
but i don't buy everything. becuase my money and property is limited.
>> But I don't buy everything because my money and property are limited.
so i think, 'this thing is really need to me?...'
>> So I think, 'Do I really need this thing?'
example same as plastic models, clothes, and watches..
>> For example, plastic models, clothes, and watches.
these things are just types of hobby, not necessity. so i buy after i think for one~two month.
>> These things are just luxuries, not necessities, so I buy them after thinking for one to two months.
but i don't save money eat things.
>> But I don't save money when it comes to eating.
if i want to eat something, i eat it.
>> CORRECT
because i feel good when i want to eat food.
>> Because I feel good when I eat food.
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