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The historical places I visited in Korea are Gyeongbokgung Palace and Cheomseongdae. Among them, Gyeongbokgung Palace is better for me. Because Gyeongbokgung Palace is famous to foreigners and shows the history of Korea well.

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Hi, 

This is great. Thanks for sharing!

-Teacher Ash

The historical places I visited in Korea are Gyeongbokgung Palace and Cheomseongdae. 
>> The historical places I visited in Korea were Gyeongbokgung Palace and Cheomseongdae. 

Among them, Gyeongbokgung Palace is better for me. 
>> Between the two of them, Gyeongbokgung Palace is better for me. 

Because Gyeongbokgung Palace is famous to foreigners and shows the history of Korea well.
>> This is because Gyeongbokgung Palace is famous to foreigners, and it also shows the history of Korea well.
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