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There are many advatages that eyeryone in the world spoke the same language.. among them, the most advantage thing is convenient to travel. It can be possible to order menu in other countries and to decrese inconvenient misunderstanding situation caused to do not through lanuage.
Although It will be not more peaceful as everyone spoke same language. Because here are many conflicts in Korea which is spoken only same language. I think that the conflict must existed because of different value that people have, such as culture, religion, idea. But, Speaking the same lanuage is just helpful to talk each other for resolve issues.

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Thank you for this So Myeong!

There are many advatages that eyeryone in the world spoke the same language.. 
>>>  There are many advantages if everyone in the world spoke the same language.
among them, the most advantage thing is convenient to travel. 
>>>  Among them, the most advantageous thing is that it's convenient to travel. 
It can be possible to order menu in other countries and to decrese inconvenient misunderstanding situation caused to do not through lanuage.
>>>  It is possible to order a menu in other countries and to decrease the inconvenience when misunderstanding a situation caused by miscommunication.
Although It will be not more peaceful as everyone spoke same language. Because here are many conflicts in Korea which is spoken only same language. 
>>>  Although, It will not be more peaceful even if everyone spoke the same language, because there are many conflicts in Korea despite people speaking the same language.
I think that the conflict must existed because of different value that people have, such as culture, religion, idea. 
>>>  I think that the conflict exists because of different values that people have, such as culture, religion, and ideas. 
But, Speaking the same lanuage is just helpful to talk each other for resolve issues.
>>>  But, speaking the same language is just helpful to talk to each other to resolve issues/conflicts.
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