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I think receiving flowers is more meaningful to me, compared to other precious presents. They are not expensive or rare, but they give me an impression of concern and care. I think it's partially because of the inherent characteristic of flowers. It's fluorescent color and shape of broad-blown petals makes me to feel happiness and joy. Combined with the good scent, delightfulness is amplified.
Flower can't be delivered unlike other presents so that I also feel concerned, imagining the person who gave me the flowers selecting a flower at a offline shop. In this way, I feel deeper gratitude when I receive flowers from someone.

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Hello, Ms. WooIn! Your words highlight how flowers, though simple, carry layers of meaning: care, effort, thoughtfulness, and even a touch of nature¡¯s magic. What a beautiful reflection.
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I think receiving flowers is more meaningful to me, compared to other precious presents.
>>Correct!
They are not expensive or rare, but they give me an impression of concern and care. 
>>They may not be expensive or rare, but they give me a strong impression of concern and care.
I think it's partially because of the inherent characteristic of flowers. 
>> Correct!
It's fluorescent color and shape of broad-blown petals makes me to feel happiness and joy. 
>>Their fluorescent colors and the shape of broad-blown petals make me feel happiness and joy.
Combined with the good scent, delightfulness is amplified.
>>Combined with their pleasant scent, the delight is amplified.
Flower can't be delivered unlike other presents so that I also feel concerned, imagining the person who gave me the flowers selecting a flower at a offline shop. 
>>Unlike other presents, flowers can't be easily delivered, so I also feel touched imagining the person who gave them to me, carefully selecting them at a flower shop.
OR. 
Unlike other gifts, flowers require a personal touch, so I feel especially moved imagining the person hand-picking them at a flower shop.
In this way, I feel deeper gratitude when I receive flowers from someone.
>>In this way, I feel even deeper gratitude when I receive flowers from someone.
OR. That¡¯s why receiving flowers makes me feel especially grateful and cherished.
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