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How does the etiquette of eating together in your country differ from other countries?

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Foods with soup such a stew put a personal spoon in one pot and scoop up the soup, but it was decided that there was a hygienic problem, so it changed to a method of sharing it on a personal plate.
Also, noodles are eaten whil slurping because it looks delicious to eat while slurping

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Hello, Ji Yun!
Thank you for sharing your thought. :)

Your ideas were on point! You gave two clear examples of cultural eating habits. Try to check your spelling (e.g., whil ¡æ while) and make your sentences a bit smoother. Adding transition words like ¡°For example¡± or ¡°Nowadays¡± can also help your answer flow better. Keep practicing—you're doing great!
~ Trixia

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Foods with soup such a stew put a personal spoon in one pot and scoop up the soup, but it was decided that there was a hygienic problem, so it changed to a method of sharing it on a personal plate.
- In my country, people used to eat foods like stew by putting their personal spoon into one shared pot to scoop the soup. However, due to hygiene concerns, this changed to a method where the soup is shared on individual plates.
Also, noodles are eaten whil slurping because it looks delicious to eat while slurping
- Also, noodles are eaten while slurping because it shows that the food is delicious.
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