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In what ways has your relationship with your pet affedted your emotional well-being?

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2025-04-10 14

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In what ways has your relationship with your pet affedted your emotional well-being?
After the adoption, I can laught much better than before.
I can say everything more softly. I could feel relax when I see my dog in the situtation I stressed out about something. I don't figure out what the dog is doing. The dog might express herself. I regret that I hesitated the adoption at that time. But If I would go back that time, I will consider it as same. Because It is responsible for someone's life.

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Hello, Stella! I think you've made the best decision to adopt your dog. ^^ She's been the best addition to your family. Thank you for sharing!
~T. Jewel
After the adoption, I can laught much better than before.
>>After the adoption, I can laugh much better than before.
I can say everything more softly. 
>>I can speak more gently now.
OR
>>I can say things more softly than before.
I could feel relax when I see my dog in the situtation I stressed out about something.
>>I feel relaxed when I see my dog in situations where I'm stressed out.
I don't figure out what the dog is doing.
>>I can't figure out what my dog is doing.
The dog might express herself.
>>The dog might be expressing herself.
I regret that I hesitated the adoption at that time.
>>I regret hesitating to adopt it back then.
But If I would go back that time, I will consider it as same.
>>But if I could go back to that time, I would consider it the same.
OR
>>But if I could go back, I¡¯d make the same choice.
Because It is responsible for someone's life.
>>Because I'm responsible for someone's life.
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