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Why do you think more people choose not to get married recently?

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2025-04-10 7

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Many Korean young people don't get married recently.
In my opinion, the growth of ecnomy in Korea is bad and the price is too high, so many people hesititate their marrige.
It's tough to buy own house lately.

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Hi! I¡¯m delighted you dedicated time to completing the homework. You did a wonderful job expressing your experiences—keep up the great effort!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^


Many Korean young people don't get married recently.
>> Many young people in Korea are choosing not to get married these days.

In my opinion, the growth of ecnomy in Korea is bad and the price is too high, so many people hesititate their marrige.
>> In my opinion, this is mainly because of the slow economic growth and the high cost of living. As a result, many people hesitate to get married.

It's tough to buy own house lately.
>> These days, it's especially difficult to buy a home.
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