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I think rich people care about politics .
But they don't involve about them.
They support specific politician and spend a lot of money on donations to our country.
But it is not passion toward the politics.
They only want to know the current of politics system to survive.
They can hold out all situations.
Because they would solve the problem by employing fixer like individual teacher or tex accountant even the detective.

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Good day, Sunny!
There are two people that we see when it comes to politicians: One is to get protected, while the other is to get influence.
Which one are you?
Aki~

I think rich people care about politics.
>>> CORRECT!

But they don't involve about them.
>>> But they don't care about them.

They support specific politician and spend a lot of money on donations to our country.
>>> They support a specific politician and spend a lot of money on donations to our country.

But it is not passion toward the politics.
>>> But it is not a passion for politics.

They only want to know the current of politics system to survive.
>>> They only want to know the current political system to survive.

They can hold out all situations.
>>> They can hold out in all situations.

Because they would solve the problem by employing fixer like individual teacher or tex accountant even the detective.
>>> Because they would solve the problem by employing a fixer like the individual teacher or tax accountant even the detective.

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