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What was the best spring season memory you have? Why?

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Well, I think it's a memory related to cherry blossoms.
We have a quite big park in our city.
The park is spacious, there is a large pond, and it also has a great fountain show. It is also a place where the scenery is very nice.
Cherry blossoms bloom beautifully in spring and autumn leaves bloom beautifully.
I remember meeting with my best friend in pretty clothes at such a park and enjoying it.
It was good to see pretty cherry blossoms because they were originally pretty, and I want to say that it is the best memory because the atmosphere of talking with my best friend happily, eating delicious food, and walking is peaceful and good.

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Hi! 

Thank you for sharing your answer with me. It was nice learning about your most precious memory about spring. 
I sincerely appreciate it. ^^

~ Teacher Gina



Well, I think it's a memory related to cherry blossoms.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: Well, I think my favorite memory is related to cherry blossoms.

We have a quite big park in our city.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: There¡¯s a large park in our city.

The park is spacious, there is a large pond, and it also has a great fountain show. 
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: he park is spacious, with a large pond and an amazing fountain show.

It is also a place where the scenery is very nice.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: It also has beautiful scenery.
>> Or: The view there is also really nice.

Cherry blossoms bloom beautifully in spring and autumn leaves bloom beautifully.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: Cherry blossoms bloom beautifully in spring, and the autumn leaves are just as stunning.

I remember meeting with my best friend in pretty clothes at such a park and enjoying it.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: I remember meeting my best friend there, both of us dressed nicely, and really enjoying our time.

It was good to see pretty cherry blossoms because they were originally pretty, and I want to say that it is the best memory because the atmosphere of talking with my best friend happily, eating delicious food, and walking is peaceful and good.
>> CORRECT.
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