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I think the worst of allergy that i don¡¯t want to eat it. For example, i don¡¯t eat Korea melon which is my favorite food but when i turned 16, i became allergic to honeydew. So i don¡¯t it anymore. Another reason, i don¡¯t experience taste which i had allergy food. When many people say ¡°it¡¯s very delicious¡±, i feel sad because i don¡¯t eat them.

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Hi, Chloe!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. You really did well! :)
~ T. Camille

I think the worst of allergy that I don¡¯t want to eat it. 
>> I think the worst kind of allergy is food allergy.
For example, I don¡¯t eat Korea melon which is my favorite food but when I turned 16, I became allergic to honeydew. 
>> For example, I can't eat Korean melon even if it's my favorite food but when I turned 16, I became allergic to honeydew. 
So I don¡¯t it anymore. 
>>  So I don¡¯t eat it anymore. 
Another reason, I don¡¯t experience taste which I had allergy food. 
>> Another reason, I don¡¯t get the chance to experience the taste which I am allergic to.
When many people say ¡°it¡¯s very delicious¡±, I feel sad because I don¡¯t eat them.
>> CORRECT!
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