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HOMEWORK: Using the following sentence patterns, write an essay about your neighborhood.

Neighborhood
I reside at Asan Chungchungnamdo.

Good points
My neighborhood is mostly chlidren.

Bad points
The bad thing about my neighborhood is very noisy.

How you feel about your neighborhood
I don¡¯t like my neighborhood because the noise make me can't sleep.

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Hi Isabel! You did a great job with your homework. Your answers were clear, and I only made a few small corrections. For example, "The bad thing about my neighborhood is that it is very noisy," and "I don¡¯t like my neighborhood because the noise makes it hard for me to sleep." Overall, your answers were clear, and with just a few adjustments, they sound even better. 


~ T. Lia

Neighborhood
I reside at Asan Chungchungnamdo.
>> CORRECT

Good points
My neighborhood is mostly chlidren.
>> CORRECT

Bad points
The bad thing about my neighborhood is very noisy.
>> The bad thing about my neighborhood is that it is very noisy.

How you feel about your neighborhood
I don¡¯t like my neighborhood because the noise make me can't sleep.
>> I don¡¯t like my neighborhood because the noise makes it hard for me to sleep.

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