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Can you trust a friend again after they have betrayed you?

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2025-03-28 160

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I can't trust my friend again. The most important thing between person is trust. If we lose trust we lose everything.
Before we used to a joint surety. I need a joint surety when I borrow money in the bank. If I can't pay money, a joint surety have to pay. So a lot of person had to pay instead of debtor. Most surety was their friends. Their relationship became mess. Now this system is changed.
I think that you trust your friend but don't trust money.

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Hi, Ms. Eva!
Thank you for this! People were saying not to involve money with friendship, especially on lending. It can ruin your relationship!
See you later! 
Aki


I can't trust my friend again.
>> CORRECT!

The most important thing between person is trust.
>>The most important thing between people is trust.

If we lose trust, we lose everything.
>> CORRECT!

Before we used to a joint surety.
>> CORRECT!

I need a joint surety when I borrow money in the bank.
>> I need a joint surety when I borrow money from the bank.

If I can't pay money, a joint surety have to pay.
>> If I can't pay money, a joint surety has to pay.

So a lot of person had to pay instead of debtor. Most surety was their friends. 
>> So a lot of people had to pay instead of the debtor. Most surety was their friends. 

Their relationship became mess. Now this system is changed.
>>Their relationship became a mess. Now this system has changed.

I think that you trust your friend, but don't trust money.
>> CORRECT!


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