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Hi sharon
First of all, I want to tell you...
I got 7.0 overall!!!!! Thank you!!!
reading: 7.0
listening: 6.5
wirting: 6.5
speaking: 7.0
I think I can apply any university with this score! except Cambridge or Oxford...
On top of that, I have another meeting with university of leeds !!!

So, let me inform you my zoom ID then
450 094 5569
or ...
yuyinzhu@naver.com I am not sure which is the correct one..

see you!

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Hi June!
I'm so happy for you.
I knew you could do it.
Good job on not losing hope.
Now, you can go to your next steps with a light heart.
Congratulations!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
First of all, I want to tell you...
>> There's something I want to tell you first.
I got 7.0 overall!!
>> I got 7.0 band score for IELTS. 
Thank you!!!
>> Correct
I think I can apply any university with this score! except Cambridge or Oxford...
>> I think I can apply to any university with this score!
except Cambridge or Oxford...
>> This is of course not including Cambridge and Oxford.
On top of that, I have another meeting with university of leeds !!!
>> On top of that, I have another meeting with the University of Leeds.
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