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How do you deal with complications?

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2025-03-27 21

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this solve way is different about small issue or big small.
first, when small issue, i can having many thinking and i solve this issue so fast. if no deadline.
but when big issue(deadline exist) arising, i report to my co-worker and superior.
and i solve about big issue. but if short time, i requested help to my co-worker.
anyway small issue and big issue, i report to my superior.
i think what a admit mistake is prevent the bigger issue.

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Hi, Hun!
You are right! The way of solving big and small issues varies depending on the severity and the time you have, but both issues need to be addressed as soon as possible. It's nice that you asked for help when needed.
- T. Caitlyn 
this solve way is different about small issue or big small.
>> The way of solving issues is different for small issues and big issues.
first, when small issue, i can having many thinking and i solve this issue so fast.
 if no deadline.
>> First, when it is a small issue, I take time to think about it and can solve it quickly if there is no deadline.
but when big issue(deadline exist) arising, i report to my co-worker and superior.
>> But when a big issue arises (with a deadline), I report it to my co-worker and superior.
and i solve about big issue. but if short time, i requested help to my co-worker.
>>  I work on solving the big issue, but if there is little time, I request help from my co-worker.
anyway small issue and big issue, i report to my superior.
>> Regardless of whether it is a small issue or a big issue, I report it to my superior.
i think what a admit mistake is prevent the bigger issue.
>> I think admitting mistakes helps prevent bigger issues.
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