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If you could meet you any dead person, what would you do ?

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That's an interesting question.
I am an atheist. so I don't believe in the afterlife.
But if I could meet a dead person, I would ask the person what the afterlife is like.
And I also wonder if there is heaven and hell in the afterlife.
And I also want to know if people go to heaven if they do good things and go to hell if they do bad things.
If so, I will try to do only good things from now on.
I have one more question to the dead person.
I know that the Christian church teaches that only those who believe in Christianity can go to heaven.
If that is true, I will go to the Christian church every Sunday from now on.
Finally, I would like to meet my Army officer friend who died of leukemia a long time ago and ask him if he is happy there.
I am very interested in astronomy.
In astronomy, it is said that humans come from space. because humans are made up of atoms that exist in space.
If I were fluent in English, I could explain it to you better, but I'm sorry I couldn't.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Soon Ho^^
Thank you for sharing.
Those are fascinating thoughts. 
_T. SHAY^^
***
That's an interesting question.
>>Correct
OR: That's a thought-provoking question.
I am an atheist. so I don't believe in the afterlife.
>>I am an atheist, so I don't believe in the afterlife.
But if I could meet a dead person, I would ask the person what the afterlife is like.
>>Correct
OR: But if I could meet someone who passed away, I would ask what the afterlife is like.
And I also wonder if there is heaven and hell in the afterlife.
>>Correct
OR: And I also wonder if heaven and hell exist in the afterlife.
And I also want to know if people go to heaven if they do good things and go to hell if they do bad things.
>>Correct
OR: I'm also curious whether people who do good things go to heaven and people who do bad things go to hell.
If so, I will try to do only good things from now on.
>>Correct
OR: If that's the case, I will try to do only the good things starting now.
I have one more question to the dead person.
>>Correct
OR: I would ask another question to the dead person.
I know that the Christian church teaches that only those who believe in Christianity can go to heaven.
>>Correct
OR: I heard that, according to the Christian church, only Christians can go to heaven.
If that is true, I will go to the Christian church every Sunday from now on.
>>Correct
OR: If that is really the case, I'll attend the Christian church every Sunday. 
Finally, I would like to meet my Army officer friend who died of leukemia a long time ago and ask him if he is happy there.
>>Finally, I would like to meet my army officer friend who died of leukemia a long time ago and ask him if he is happy there.
OR: Finally, I would like to meet my friend, an army offer who died from leukemia long ago, and ask him if he is happy where he is now.
I am very interested in astronomy.
>>Correct
OR: I am really into astronomy.
In astronomy, it is said that humans come from space. because humans are made up of atoms that exist in space.
>>In astronomy, it is said that humans come from space because humans are made up of atoms that exist in space.
If I were fluent in English, I could explain it to you better, but I'm sorry I couldn't.
>>Correct
OR: I wish I were fluent in English so I could explain it to you better--sorry that I can't. 
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