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If I could eat only one food for the rest of my life, I would choose Kimchi and Rice (These two are one set!).
This set is not my favorite but I chose it because I thought I have to consider whether it digests well along with the good taste, if I have to eat only that food for the rest of my life. Kimchi and Rice are foods that I ate since I was born that I'm sure I would be capable of digesting them smoothly even though I eat everyday. My digestion system is accustomed to them already. Also Kimchi has bacteria that are helpful for digestion such as lactic acid bacteria so that digestion wouldn't be a problem.
Moreover, if I eat the same food everyday I would definitely sick of that food. However, Kimchi has certain flavor that raise an appetite so I believe it will be less tough to endure compare to surviving with other single food.
Therefore I would select Rice and Kimchi if I have to eat only one food for the rest of my life.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Ms. WooIn! That’s an interesting and thoughtful choice! Kimchi and rice definitely make a well-balanced and culturally rich combination. Thank you for sharing!
-T. Sonny
If I could eat only one food for the rest of my life, I would choose Kimchi and Rice (These two are one set!).
>>Correct!
This set is not my favorite but I chose it because I thought I have to consider whether it digests well along with the good taste, if I have to eat only that food for the rest of my life. 
>>This set isn’t my favorite, but I chose it because I considered not only whether it tastes good but also whether it digests well, since I’d have to eat it every day for the rest of my life.
Kimchi and Rice are foods that I ate since I was born that I'm sure I would be capable of digesting them smoothly even though I eat everyday. 
>>Kimchi and rice are foods I’ve eaten since I was born, so I’m sure I’d be able to digest them smoothly, even if I ate them every day.
My digestion system is accustomed to them already. 
>>Correct!
Also Kimchi has bacteria that are helpful for digestion such as lactic acid bacteria so that digestion wouldn't be a problem.
>>Also, kimchi contains bacteria, like lactic acid bacteria, that are helpful for digestion, so digestion wouldn’t be a problem.
Moreover, if I eat the same food everyday I would definitely sick of that food. 
>>Moreover, if I ate the same food every day, I’d definitely get sick of it.
However, Kimchi has certain flavor that raise an appetite so I believe it will be less tough to endure compare to surviving with other single food.
>>However, kimchi has a unique flavor that stimulates the appetite, so I believe it would be less difficult to endure compared to surviving on another single food.
Therefore I would select Rice and Kimchi if I have to eat only one food for the rest of my life.
>>Correct!
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