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Describe a person who helps to protect the environment You should say

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One person who helps to protect the environment is Jane Goodall, who is a world-renowned primatologist and environmental activist. She has dedicated her life to wildlife conservation and environmental protection. Jane Goodall has been actively working in this field for decades. She started studying chimpanzees in Tanzania in the 1960s, but over time, she expanded her focus to include global environmental issues. Also, she continues her work today through the promotion of conservation efforts and sustainable living. Throughout her life, she has accomplished numerous things to protect the environment. One of her major contributions is raising awareness about deforestation and habitat destruction. I believe she does this because she has a deep love for animals and nature. She understands how human activities negatively impact the planet and wants to inspire change. I think fer passion and lifelong dedication to environmental protection make people inspire the problem or animals and nature

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Hi there Serah~!^^ Thanks for giving your effort in studying IELTS. You've done well to showcase Jane Goodall's dedication, accomplishments, and the broad scope of her work. The structure is clear, and you’ve conveyed how her passion for animals and nature drives her activism. I just had minimal revisions but overall your essay is commendable! Have a great weekend!
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
One person who helps to protect the environment is Jane Goodall, who is a world-renowned primatologist and environmental activist. She has dedicated her life to wildlife conservation and environmental protection. Jane Goodall has been actively working in this field for decades. She started studying chimpanzees in Tanzania in the 1960s, but over time, she expanded her focus to include global environmental issues. Also, she continues her work today through the promotion of conservation efforts and sustainable living. Throughout her life, she has accomplished numerous things to protect the environment. One of her major contributions is raising awareness about deforestation and habitat destruction. I believe she does this because she has a deep love for animals and nature. She understands how human activities negatively impact the planet and wants to inspire change. I think fer passion and lifelong dedication to environmental protection make people inspire the problem or animals and nature
>>>One person who has greatly contributed to protecting the environment is Jane Goodall, a world-renowned primatologist and environmental activist. She has dedicated her life to wildlife conservation and environmental protection. Jane Goodall has been actively involved in this field for decades, beginning with her study of chimpanzees in Tanzania in the 1960s. Over time, her focus expanded to include global environmental issues, and she continues her work today by promoting conservation efforts and sustainable living. Throughout her life, she has made significant strides in raising awareness about deforestation and habitat destruction. I believe she is driven by her deep love for animals and nature. She understands the harmful impact of human activities on the planet and aims to inspire positive change. Her passion and lifelong commitment to environmental protection have inspired many to recognize the importance of protecting animals and nature.
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