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I'm not a person who usually reads book so I always have to try to remember far past to answer the question related to books. Anyway I think my favoite book is Uglies series by Scott Westerfeld. They are about future world that everyone has to have plastic surgeries of whole body when they get to certain age. However their is other hidden world that protests to that kind of world. So main storyline is about how the main character conflicts between these two world as she gets into the standard age.
The reason why I like this novel is because its story is extremely creative and overwhelming. Although my concentration is not that good to read thick books, I read all each three books almost without having a break. This series are being made as a film these days(especially the first one), so I'm enjoying it also and expecting the other 2 series to be filmed soon.

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Hello, Ms. WooIn! That sounds like such a captivating series! The concept of a future where everyone undergoes plastic surgery to conform to an ideal standard is both thought-provoking and unsettling. I'm curious!
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I'm not a person who usually reads book so I always have to try to remember far past to answer the question related to books. 
>>I¡¯m not a person who usually reads books, so I often have to dig deep into my memory to answer questions related to books.
Anyway I think my favoite book is Uglies series by Scott Westerfeld. 
>>Anyway, I think my favorite book series is Uglies by Scott Westerfeld.

They are about future world that everyone has to have plastic surgeries of whole body when they get to certain age. 
>>It¡¯s set in a future world where everyone has to undergo plastic surgery on their entire body when they reach a certain age.

However their is other hidden world that protests to that kind of world. 
>>However, there is a hidden world that protests this kind of society.

So main storyline is about how the main character conflicts between these two world as she gets into the standard age.
>>The main storyline revolves around the conflict the protagonist faces between these two worlds as she reaches the age where she¡¯s expected to undergo surgery.

The reason why I like this novel is because its story is extremely creative and overwhelming. 
>>The reason I like this novel is that its story is extremely creative and overwhelming.

Although my concentration is not that good to read thick books, I read all each three books almost without having a break. 
>>Although my concentration isn¡¯t great for reading thick books, I read all three of them almost without a break.

This series are being made as a film these days(especially the first one), so I'm enjoying it also and expecting the other 2 series to be filmed soon.
>>This series is being adapted into a film these days (especially the first one), so I¡¯m enjoying it and am excited for the other two books to be filmed soon.
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