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I listen to music often. Music takes various parts of my life. For example when I study or walk I usually play background music because I feel less distracted with the music. I'm used to it that sometimes I feel rather empty when there is no background music.
I also play music when there's a work that I have to start right away but I don't really feel to do it. Turning on a music at that moment is like a challenge for me. My own challenge that I must start the work before the music ends begins as the music starts.
These moments are frequent in my daily life that this is also one of the factors that makes me listen to music more often.

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Hello, Ms. WooIn! That's so relatable! It sounds like music plays a central role in your routine, almost like a motivational tool. It's fascinating how it helps you stay focused or even pushes you to get started on tasks you might not feel like doing.
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I listen to music often. 
>>Correct!
Music takes various parts of my life. 
>>Music plays a significant role in various parts of my life.

For example when I study or walk I usually play background music because I feel less distracted with the music. 
>>For example, when I study or walk, I usually play background music because it helps me feel less distracted.
I'm used to it that sometimes I feel rather empty when there is no background music.
>>I'm so used to it that sometimes I feel a bit empty when there is no background music.
I also play music when there's a work that I have to start right away but I don't really feel to do it. 
>>I also play music when I have work to do but don't really feel like doing it.
Turning on a music at that moment is like a challenge for me. 
>>Turning on music at that moment feels like a challenge for me.

My own challenge that I must start the work before the music ends begins as the music starts.
>>I have turned it into a challenge that I must finish the work before the music ends, and begin as soon as the music starts.
These moments are frequent in my daily life that this is also one of the factors that makes me listen to music more often.
>>These moments happen frequently in my daily life, which is one of the reasons I listen to music so often.
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