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Koreans tent to estimate others by outward appearance , possessions and fashion and so on.

These culture make each others consumable.

Many people try not to be ignored by others .

They think that it is important not to like like a poor and out of style people.

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Ms. Lily!
Individual attitudes vary, and many people place value on inner qualities, such as personality and character, over material possessions or physical appearance. While these tendencies exist, it's important to recognize that not all Koreans, or people in any culture, judge others solely on what they see.
Have a good afternoon!
Aki~

Koreans tent to estimate others by outward appearance , possessions and fashion and so on.
>>>  Koreans tend to estimate others by their outward appearance, possessions fashion, and so on.

These culture make each others consumable.
>>> These cultures make each other consumable.

Many people try not to be ignored by others .
>>> CORRECT!

They think that it is important not to like like a poor and out of style people.
>>> They think that it is important not to like poor and out-of-style people.
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