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Q : Have you ever felt under the weather but still had to complete an important task? What was the situation, and how did you handle it? Describe your experience in detail.

A : Yes i have. In 2023, i was a trainee of this company.
One day, i felt sickness from the time i woke up.
Since it was very hard to say i am sick, i worked until lunch time.
But i felt that my condition is so bad, so i told to my manager i should go to the hospital.
A doctor said that i got a COVID-19 and i went to my home.
After that, i worked a week at home and get back to the office.

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Hi Eddy!

This must have been such a tough experience for you. Feeling sick but still pushing through with work is never easy, especially when you¡¯re a trainee and don¡¯t want to show any weakness. I completely understand why it was difficult for you to say that you weren¡¯t feeling well. Sometimes, we feel pressure to keep going no matter what, even when our body is telling us to rest.

You handled the situation well, though! Even though you tried to keep working, you listened to your body when it got worse and made the right decision to inform your manager. That takes courage, especially in a professional setting. Going to the hospital and getting diagnosed with COVID-19 must have been a shock, but I¡¯m glad you were able to recover and continue working from home.

This experience shows your dedication, but also the importance of knowing when to take care of yourself. No matter how important a task is, our health always comes first. You did the responsible thing by stepping back when you needed to, and that¡¯s a really valuable lesson.

Your writing is clear, and I love how you shared your personal experience with honesty. Keep practicing, and don¡¯t be afraid to add even more details about how you felt during the experience, it will make your story even more engaging. You're doing a great job! Keep it up!

~Teacher Cathy

Yes i have. In 2023, i was a trainee of this company.

>>Yes, I have. In 2023, I was a trainee at this company.

One day, i felt sickness from the time i woke up.

>>One day, I felt sick from the moment I woke up.

Since it was very hard to say i am sick, i worked until lunch time.

>>Since it was very hard for me to say I was sick, I worked until lunchtime.

But i felt that my condition is so bad, so i told to my manager i should go to the hospital.

>>But as my condition worsened, I told my manager that I needed to go to the hospital.

A doctor said that i got a COVID-19 and i went to my home.

>>The doctor said I had COVID-19, so I went home.

After that, i worked a week at home and get back to the office.

>>After that, I worked from home for a week before returning to the office.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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