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What are your happiest hometown memories?

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In my hometown, there used to be an small amusement park.
Since I was very young, I visited the amusement park with my parents and took many pictures.
Even when I remember, I took delicious things with my parents in the car, spread out a mat, sat down, ate, and rode a children's roller coaster etc. I remember having fun taking pictures with my family.
The amusement park has been a picnic area for my family for a few years even after my brother was born, and has disappeared as fewer people visit.
But it remains a happy memory for my family.

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Hi, 

Thank you for sharing your answer with me. It was nice to know about your happiest hometown memory. This kind of memory is one of those we could treasure forever. ^^ 

~ Teacher Gina 



In my hometown, there used to be an small amusement park.
>> In my hometown, there used to be a small amusement park.

Since I was very young, I visited the amusement park with my parents and took many pictures.
>> When I was very young, I used to visit the amusement park with my parents and take many pictures.

Even when I remember, I took delicious things with my parents in the car, spread out a mat, sat down, ate, and rode a children's roller coaster etc. I remember having fun taking pictures with my family.
>> I remember bringing delicious snacks in the car with my parents, spreading out a mat, sitting down to eat, and riding the children's roller coaster. I also had fun taking pictures with my family.

The amusement park has been a picnic area for my family for a few years even after my brother was born, and has disappeared as fewer people visit.
>> The amusement park remained a picnic spot for my family for a few years, even after my brother was born, but it eventually closed as fewer people visited.

But it remains a happy memory for my family.
>> CORRECT.
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