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Talk about your favorite day of the week

작성자: 박*호
2025-03-14 109

회원님의 영작문

Of course, my favorite day is Friday.
Fridays make me happy because it means I can finish the week's work and look forward to the next two day break.
If next Monday is a substitute holiday like the previous Monday, I am even happier to take a three-day break.
Especially in the spring like these days, I can enjoy my favorite outdoor sports like riding or golf during weekend, so on Fridays, I feel happy making plans for the weekend.
On the other hand, although it is good to enjoy outdoor activities on weekends, I also feel depressed when I think about the upcoming Monday.
I work as an advisor now, so I don't have that much work, but when I was a director, the workload was so much that I really hated going to work on Mondays. So back then, I was really depressed on Sundays.
Now I'm happiest on Fridays and most depressed on Sundays, but less depressed than Sundays of the past.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Soon Ho^^
Thank you for sharing.
I guess most people like Fridays. 
In my case, I don't have a favorite day these days. 
_T. SHAY^^
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Of course, my favorite day is Friday.
>>Correct
OR: Like most people, my favorite day is Friday.
Fridays make me happy because it means I can finish the week's work and look forward to the next two day break.
>>Fridays make me happy because it means I can finish the week's work and look forward to the next two-day break.
OR: Fridays make me happy because it's the last day of the working week, and I can look forward to the two-day break.
If next Monday is a substitute holiday like the previous Monday, I am even happier to take a three-day break.
>>Correct
OR: In cases where the holiday or substitute holiday falls on a Monday, I am even happier to have a long weekend.
Especially in the spring like these days, I can enjoy my favorite outdoor sports like riding or golf during weekend, so on Fridays, I feel happy making plans for the weekend.
>>I especially like spring because I can enjoy my favorite outdoor sports like riding a bike or playing golf during the weekend. So on Fridays, I feel happy making plans for the weekend.
On the other hand, although it is good to enjoy outdoor activities on weekends, I also feel depressed when I think about the upcoming Monday.
>>Correct
OR: On the other hand, although I can enjoy the outdoor activities on weekends, I also feel sad thinking about Monday which is just around the corner.
I work as an advisor now, so I don't have that much work, but when I was a director, the workload was so much that I really hated going to work on Mondays.
>>Correct
OR: These days, I am working as an advisor, and I am not that busy. However, back when I was a director, the I worked a lot that I really hated to work on Mondays. 
So back then, I was really depressed on Sundays.
>>Correct
OR: So, back then I usually felt sad on Sundays.
Now I'm happiest on Fridays and most depressed on Sundays, but less depressed than Sundays of the past.
>>Now I'm happiest on Fridays and most depressed on Sundays, but less depressed than the Sundays in the past.
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