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회원님의 영작문

Traveling alone or together have clear pros and cons.
For traveling alone, I think its advantage is that I can personalize the trip. I can go to the places or eat foods that I want, and I can also change the travel plan fluidly in accordance with my condition. Traveling together, conflicts often start because of different tastes or preferences. But since their are nobody I would bump head with during solo traveling, it's emotionally more stable.
Even though traveling alone has strong benefit, the fact that the one has to travel alone brings some limitations in traveling. For example, some restaurants require the number of the guests to be 2 or more and if the one wants to take a photo with the beautiful scenery he/she has to ask other people which is hard to ask for the requirements of the photo that he/she wants to take.
Traveling alone or together have each own pros and cons so I think the most important thing is to enjoy every travel regardless of the number of people I go with.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Ms. WooIn! I really like your perspective that the most important thing is to enjoy the journey, no matter who you're traveling with. It’s all about embracing the experience, whether you’re with others or alone.
-T. Sonny
Traveling alone or together have clear pros and cons.
>>Traveling alone or together has clear pros and cons.

For traveling alone, I think its advantage is that I can personalize the trip. 
>>When traveling alone, I think one advantage is that I can personalize the trip.
I can go to the places or eat foods that I want, and I can also change the travel plan fluidly in accordance with my condition.
>>I can go to the places I want to visit or eat the foods I want, and I can also change my travel plan freely according to my mood or condition.
Traveling together, conflicts often start because of different tastes or preferences. 
>>When traveling together, conflicts often arise due to different tastes or preferences.
But since their are nobody I would bump head with during solo traveling, it's emotionally more stable.
>>But since there’s no one I would clash with during solo travel, it’s emotionally more stable.
Even though traveling alone has strong benefit, the fact that the one has to travel alone brings some limitations in traveling.
>>Even though traveling alone has strong benefits, the fact that one has to travel alone comes with some limitations.
For example, some restaurants require the number of the guests to be 2 or more and if the one wants to take a photo with the beautiful scenery he/she has to ask other people which is hard to ask for the requirements of the photo that he/she wants to take.
>>For example, some restaurants require a minimum of two guests, and if someone wants to take a photo with beautiful scenery, they have to ask others, which can be difficult when trying to get the exact photo they want.
Traveling alone or together have each own pros and cons so I think the most important thing is to enjoy every travel regardless of the number of people I go with.
>>Traveling alone or together has its own pros and cons, so I think the most important thing is to enjoy every trip, regardless of the number of people I travel with.
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