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1. Suddenly the children see an old man. It's their grandfather.
2. The farmer is a very generous man. He gives George his horse.
3. Aunt Mary is sitting at the table. Peter fills her glass with juice.
4. Harry sees a woman walking very slowly. It's his mother.
5. Peter takes an apple out of the schoolbag. It's his apple.
6. We take the guitars and start to play. Our music is great.
7. Captain Clark drives a yellow sports car. It's his car.
8. We meet Drew and Mary in the circus. They are our friends.
9. I need a pen. Can you lend me your pen?
10. Tom and Robert like to eat fish and chips. It's their favorite food.

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Good Day Yumin!

I'm glad that you are doing well in English. I commend you for your improvements.

I am more than happy to help you to become much more fluent! ^^



1. Suddenly the children see an old man. It's their grandfather.
>>correct
2. The farmer is a very generous man. He gives George his horse.
>>correct
3. Aunt Mary is sitting at the table. Peter fills her glass with juice.
>>correct
4. Harry sees a woman walking very slowly. It's his mother.
>>correct
5. Peter takes an apple out of the schoolbag. It's his apple.
>>correct
6. We take the guitars and start to play. Our music is great.
>>correct
7. Captain Clark drives a yellow sports car. It's his car.
>>correct
8. We meet Drew and Mary in the circus. They are our friends.
>>correct
9. I need a pen. Can you lend me your pen?
>>correct
10. Tom and Robert like to eat fish and chips. It's their favorite food.
>>correct
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