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What is your favorite part of your daily schedule? Why?

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There are two of my favorite parts of my daily schedule.
First, it's time for lunch.
Lunch menus are normal, but it's time to relax for a while after working from the morning. Most of all, I like eating. This is because I can eat delicious food and have conversations with my colleagues at work while eating.
And lunch time is quite long. It's nice to be able to short sleep during that time.
Second, it's P.E. time.
Our company has a very unique culture, and we have time to do physical education activities an hour before work.
Because it doesn't matter if we take a break, so it's a very useful time.

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Hi! 

Thank you for submitting your answer. I was surprised that you do PE at work. I think it is a great thing to have that to promote health and wellness to all employees. ^^ 

~ Teacher Gina


There are two of my favorite parts of my daily schedule.
>> There are two favorite parts of my daily schedule.

First, it's time for lunch.
>>  First is the time for lunch.
>> Or: First, my favorite time is lunch.

Lunch menus are normal, but it's time to relax for a while after working from the morning.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: The lunch menu is usually simple, but it¡¯s a great time to relax after working since the morning.

Most of all, I like eating. This is because I can eat delicious food and have conversations with my colleagues at work while eating.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: Most of all, I love eating because it allows me to enjoy delicious food and chat with my colleagues.

And lunch time is quite long. It's nice to be able to short sleep during that time.
>> Lunchtime is quite long, so it¡¯s nice to take a short nap during that period.

Second, it's P.E. time.
>> Second, I enjoy P.E. time.

Our company has a very unique culture, and we have time to do physical education activities an hour before work.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: Our company has a unique culture where we engage in physical activities an hour before work.

Because it doesn't matter if we take a break, so it's a very useful time.
>> CORRECT.
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