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If there is a chance that I can foresee my future, I would like to know my success. Specifically, I would like to know when I can have a sustainable life in the UK. I was under financial instability for the past two years due to the currency rate, high tax and extremely expensive cost of living. Even it has been a two year, I was not able to make a savings, which was possible for me on the second month in Japan. Due to financial instability, I had to go through health issues too because I volunteered for more jobs and had a second job over a year. Past two years I learned how people can get sick of having anxiety and concern about financial stability. I cannot say financial wellbeing is most important in your life. Many people find a way to maintain their livelihood with small income. However, I believe that abundant financial resources allow me to ground a foundation in successful foreign life. This is because the money is what you can rely on if there is no one you can rely on to.

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Thank you for this Aciel! Your time(for success) will come. It's coming. You are not going down without a fight. Good luck!

If there is a chance that I can foresee my future, I would like to know my success. 
>>> correct  
>>> OR: If there is a chance that I can foresee my future, I would like to know how successful I will be. 
Specifically, I would like to know when I can have a sustainable life in the UK. 
>>> correct  
I was under financial instability for the past two years due to the currency rate, high tax and extremely expensive cost of living. 
>>>  correct  
Even it has been a two year, I was not able to make a savings, which was possible for me on the second month in Japan. 
>>> Even though it has been two years, I was not able to make a savings, which was possible for me on the second month in Japan.  
Due to financial instability, I had to go through health issues too because I volunteered for more jobs and had a second job over a year. 
>>>    correct  
Past two years I learned how people can get sick of having anxiety and concern about financial stability. 
>>>  For the past two years, I have learned how people can get sick of having anxiety and concern about financial stability. 
I cannot say financial wellbeing is most important in your life. 
>>>   correct  
Many people find a way to maintain their livelihood with small income. 
>>>   correct  
However, I believe that abundant financial resources allow me to ground a foundation in successful foreign life. 
>>>  However, I believe that abundant financial resources would allow me to ground/establish a foundation in a successful foreign life. 
This is because the money is what you can rely on if there is no one you can rely on to.
>>> OR: This is because money is what you can rely on if there is nobody to rely on.
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