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In any case, 'over' or 'excess' is not good.

Like as Overweight, overeating, overwork,and over action and so on mean extreme.

We could be choose 'All-you-can-drink(eat)' as one of the strategy of effective marketing tools .

But ultimately these choices can have negative effects to people's health and global environment.

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Hi, Ms. Lily!
You nailed it! We believe that anything "too much" is bad, and anything bad has an effect on us: personally, socially, and even in our environment. People should really act as the highest form of being, however, a lot of people also behave like animals who don't have proper judgment.
Happy weekend!
Aki~


In any case, 'over' or 'excess' is not good.
>>> CORRECT!

Like as Overweight, overeating, overwork, and over action, and so on mean extreme.
>>> Like as Overweight, overeating, overwork, over action, and so on mean extreme.

We could be choose 'All-you-can-drink(eat)' as one of the strategy of effective marketing tools .
>>> We could choose 'All-you-can-drink(eat)' as one of the strategies of effective marketing tools.

But ultimately these choices can have negative effects to people's health and global environment.
>>> But ultimately these choices can have negative effects on people's health and the global environment.
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