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What is one thing you find most exciting or interesting about learning English?

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Whenever i went to other country for vacation, Almost country use English.
But korean does not use English. So studying English in korea is ne essential.

Studying new language is so difficult. because if i want to get a nice English perfomance, I have to memorize many word and understand grammer.

But In past, I have a exciting experience.
Last year, My wife and I went to Hongkong for trip. We took a taxi to move to another city.
Taxi driver was K-pop fan. So, We Took about K-pop and Drama.
It was a very interesting experience to talk using English. And korea culture was so populary to another contry that so was amazing.

This year, My goal is getting a IH grade in opic test, And I hope free talking to other person.

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Hi Jun, I really enjoyed reading your response. You expressed your thoughts well, and it was interesting to hear about your experience talking with the K-pop fan taxi driver in Hong Kong! Your goal of improving your English and achieving an IH grade in the OPIC test is inspiring. Keep practicing, and you¡¯ll definitely get better at free talking. Looking forward to seeing your progress! 

~ T. Lia

Whenever i went to other country for vacation, Almost country use English.
>> Whenever I went to another country for vacation, almost every country used English.

But korean does not use English. So studying English in korea is ne essential.
>> But Koreans do not use English much. So, studying English in Korea is essential.

Studying new language is so difficult. because if i want to get a nice English perfomance, I have to memorize many word and understand grammer.
>> Studying a new language is very difficult because if I want to have good English skills, I have to memorize many words and understand grammar.

But In past, I have a exciting experience.
>> But in the past, I had an exciting experience.

Last year, My wife and I went to Hongkong for trip. We took a taxi to move to another city.
>> Last year, my wife and I went to Hong Kong for a trip. We took a taxi to travel to another city.

Taxi driver was K-pop fan. So, We Took about K-pop and Drama.
>> The taxi driver was a K-pop fan, so we talked about K-pop and dramas.

 It was a very interesting experience to talk using English. And korea culture was so populary to another contry that so was amazing.
>> It was a very interesting experience to talk using English. Also, Korean culture was so popular in another country, which was amazing.

This year, My goal is getting a IH grade in opic test, And I hope free talking to other person.
>> This year, my goal is to get an IH grade on the OPIc test, and I hope to speak freely with others.
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