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Do you like reading books or watching movies more? Why?

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I'd like to watch the movies better than read the books.
Because I have stopped reading book for several years so I would feel akward if I read the books, and then my concentrating time to read the book is very short.
When I was young, my environment is very friendly with the books but now my life is not close with the books.
Moreover watching the movies is more interesting and fascinateing to me.
In particular, the movies that I watched gave me some positive motivations.
Some movies has included the lessons for me.
Overall, based on my interest and my environment Iike more watching the movies.

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