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Why do you think studying English is crucial for both personal and professional development in today

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2025-03-04 170

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As the world has been changing into more globally year by year, we need a language to communicate with between countries. No doubt that English has been unchangeable language to bridge countries across the world. Therefore, English skill has been considered one of crucial abilities to live out Global village.
There are many pundits to say that studying English will be useless and replaced with translation programs sooner or later. I don’t agree with them. Studying English could end up being replaced by technology in decades but not yet at least our generation because contemporary people might feel uncomfortable to communicate with modern technology, which means that those good at languages are still more welcomed than communication with translation application between people.
If we could have amazing technology to liberate us from studying languages which are still good for us because it can help us express our thought or emotions more variously or fruitfully.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Steve!

Good opinion on this topic! 
~Teacher Jess

As the world has been changing into more globally year by year, we need a language to communicate with between countries. 
>> As the world has become more global year by year, we need a language to communicate between countries.

No doubt that English has been unchangeable language to bridge countries across the world. 
>> There is no doubt that English has remained a constant language to bridge countries across the world.

Therefore, English skill has been considered one of crucial abilities to live out Global village.
>> Therefore, English skills are considered one of the crucial abilities to thrive in the global village.

There are many pundits to say that studying English will be useless and replaced with translation programs sooner or later. 
>> There are many pundits who say that studying English will be useless and replaced by translation programs sooner or later.

I don’t agree with them. 
>> CORRECT

Studying English could end up being replaced by technology in decades but not yet at least our generation because contemporary people might feel uncomfortable to communicate with modern technology, which means that those good at languages are still more welcomed than communication with translation application between people.
>> While studying English might eventually be replaced by technology in the future, it is not the case for our generation. Contemporary people might feel uncomfortable communicating solely through modern technology, which means that those who are good at languages are still more welcomed than communication through translation applications.

If we could have amazing technology to liberate us from studying languages which are still good for us because it can help us express our thought or emotions more variously or fruitfully.
>> If we could have amazing technology that liberates us from studying languages, it would still be beneficial because it helps us express our thoughts and emotions more diversely and fruitfully.
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