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How do you prefer to be paid, in cash or have the money transferred to your account ?

작성자: 박*호
2025-03-04 113

회원님의 영작문

Maybe almost all Korean workers are being paid in their accounts.
Rather, I can say in Korea it is impossible to get paid in cash.
It's companies' rule or the government's policy.
The government recommends the use of credit cards or bank accounts rather than cash transactions for salary payments or personal transactions.
I think cash transactions are inconvenient and are related to tax evasion.
If you use a large amount of cash, it will be immediately reported to the financial authorities.
And when you visit Korea, you might have a hard time paying for the meal at restaurants in cash because most restaurants accept only credit card.
So I usually use credit cards or bank transfers when doing everyday things like eating or shopping.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Soon Ho^^
Thank you!
Yes, I think you are in a cashless society that's why. 
Here in the Philippines paying in cash is still common.
_T. SHAY^^
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Maybe almost all Korean workers are being paid in their accounts.
>>Maybe almost all Korean workers are being paid through their bank accounts.
OR: Maybe almost all Korean workers receive their salary in their bank accounts.
Rather, I can say in Korea it is impossible to get paid in cash.
>>I can say in Korea it is impossible to get paid in cash.
OR: In Korea, getting paid in cash is rare.
It's companies' rule or the government's policy.
>>It's the companies' rule or the government's policy.
The government recommends the use of credit cards or bank accounts rather than cash transactions for salary payments or personal transactions.
>>Correct
OR: The government encourages the use of credit cards or bank accounts instead of cash for salary payments or personal transactions.
I think cash transactions are inconvenient and are related to tax evasion.
>>Correct
OR: I think cash transactions are often associated with tax evasion and also inconvenient.
If you use a large amount of cash, it will be immediately reported to the financial authorities.
>>Correct
OR: The use of a huge amount of cash will be reported to the financial authorities right away.
And when you visit Korea, you might have a hard time paying for the meal at restaurants in cash because most restaurants accept only credit card.
>>Correct
OR: People who are traveling to Korea might have difficulty paying for the meal at restaurants in case because most restaurants accept only credit cards.
So I usually use credit cards or bank transfers when doing everyday things like eating or shopping.
>>Correct
OR: So, I usually use cashless transactions for daily expenses like eating or shopping.
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