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What¡¯s your comfort food?

There are a lot of foods in this world. That means... there are a lot of, many kinds of foods that I like. The world is so huge. but, Korea is too small to try all the foods in this world. so actually most of the foods that I can call 'comfort food' are foods that can eat in Seoul, Korea.
My biggest one is tteokbokki(¶±ººÀÌ). Do you know what is it??? I think tteokbokki is one of the famous foods in Korea. tteokbokki is so lovely and delicious. It is made with a rice cake and seasoning based gochujang. I like the savory and spicy flavors. That is my taste. But nowadays, I mean the late 2010 to NOw, many tteokbokki professional brands have appeared, and the price of tteokbokki has also gone. That means many live-alone people, like me, it's hard to buy and eat and can enjoy it. So... that is the most sad part for me.

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Hello, Yesol!
Thank you for sharing your comfort food! :> There are tons of delicacies from other countries that we haven't tried. However, our comfort food holds a special place in our hearts like our homeland. Tteokbokki is widely known even outside Korea. I even had tteokbokki before the concert last Saturday! :D It is best to eat it with family or friends, so I totally get you. ^^
~ Trixia

CONTENT:
There are a lot of foods in this world. 
-CORRECT
That means... there are a lot of, many kinds of foods that I like. 
- That means there are many kinds of foods that I like.
The world is so huge. but, Korea is too small to try all the foods in this world.
- The world is so huge, but Korea is too small to try all the foods in this world.
so actually most of the foods that I can call 'comfort food' are foods that can eat in Seoul, Korea. 
- So actually, most of the foods that I can call 'comfort food' are foods that I can eat in Seoul, Korea.
My biggest one is tteokbokki(¶±ººÀÌ). 
- My top comfort food is tteokbokki(¶±ººÀÌ).
Do you know what is it??? 
- Do you know what it is???
I think tteokbokki is one of the famous foods in Korea. 
- I think tteokbokki is one of the most famous foods in Korea.
tteokbokki is so lovely and delicious. 
- It is so lovely and delicious.
It is made with a rice cake and seasoning based gochujang. 
- It is made with rice cakes and seasoning based on gochujang.
I like the savory and spicy flavors. 
-CORRECT
That is my taste. 
- That is my taste preference.
But nowadays, I mean the late 2010 to NOw, many tteokbokki professional brands have appeared, and the price of tteokbokki has also gone. 
- However, from the late 2010s to now, many professional tteokbokki brands have appeared, and the price of tteokbokki has also gone up.
That means many live-alone people, like me, it's hard to buy and eat and can enjoy it. 
- That means for many people who live alone, like me, it is hard to buy and enjoy it.
So... that is the most sad part for me. 
- So... that is the saddest part for me.
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