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What¡¯s your comfort food?

There are a lot of foods in this world. That means... there are a lot of, many kinds of foods that I like. The world is so huge. but, Korea is too small to try all the foods in this world. so actually most of the foods that I can call 'comfort food' are foods that can eat in Seoul, Korea.
My biggest one is tteokbokki(¶±ººÀÌ). Do you know what is it??? I think tteokbokki is one of the famous foods in Korea. tteokbokki is so lovely and delicious. It is made with a rice cake and seasoning based gochujang. I like the savory and spicy flavors. That is my taste. But nowadays, I mean the late 2010 to NOw, many tteokbokki professional brands have appeared, and the price of tteokbokki has also gone. That means many live-alone people, like me, it's hard to buy and eat and can enjoy it. So... that is the most sad part for me.

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