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When do you usually give gifts in your country ?

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Korean people generally give gifts when they want to express their gratitude.
And sometimes, gifts are given as an expression of apology.
Also, gifts are given when celebrating birthdays, entrance and graduation of schools, or joining a company.
Young couples sometimes exchange gifts as a promise of love.
In my case, I enjoy giving gifts.
When I finished my English class last year, I sent a gift to my Filipino English teacher.
I wanted to express my grattitude and introduce a Korean culture where students give some presents to their teachers at the end of the semester.
When my juniors move from my department to other departments, I also give them gifts as a way of saying goodbye.
I feel good when I give someone a gift.
I am satisfied as long as the person receiving my gift feels good.

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Hi, Soon Ho^^
Thank you for sharing.
I guess your culture of gift giving is similar to ours. 
_T. SHAY^^
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Korean people generally give gifts when they want to express their gratitude.
>>Correct
OR: In general, Koreans give gifts to express their gratitude.
OR: Most of the time, Koreans give gifts to express their gratitude.
OR: Most of the time, gift giving is their way of showing gratitude.
And sometimes, gifts are given as an expression of apology.
>>Correct
OR: However, sometimes gifts are also given when they feel sorry.
OR: However, it's not only for showing gratitude but also apology. 
Also, gifts are given when celebrating birthdays, entrance and graduation of schools, or joining a company.
>>Also, gifts are given when celebrating birthdays, entering and graduating from schools, or joining a company.
OR: Furthermore, gifts are given in some occasions like birthdays, graduation, new jobs. 
Young couples sometimes exchange gifts as a promise of love.
>>Correct
OR: Young couples sometimes give gifts to express their affection.

In my case, I enjoy giving gifts.
>>Correct
OR: In my case, giving gifts gives me pleasure.

When I finished my English class last year, I sent a gift to my Filipino English teacher.
>>Correct
>>I also sent a gift to my Filipino English teacher last year when I completed all my classes with her.
I wanted to express my grattitude and introduce a Korean culture where students give some presents to their teachers at the end of the semester.
>>I wanted to express my gratitude and introduce a Korean culture where students give some presents to their teachers at the end of the semester. 
OR: I wanted to express my gratitude and introduce a Korean culture of gift giving specifically where students give gifts to their teachers. 
When my juniors move from my department to other departments, I also give them gifts as a way of saying goodbye.
>>Correct
OR: When my juniors move to other departments, I also give them parting gifts. 

I feel good when I give someone a gift.
>>Correct
OR: Giving gifts makes me feel good.

I am satisfied as long as the person receiving my gift feels good.
>>Correct
OR: I feel happy knowing that the person receiving the gift feels good. 
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