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If i can choose past or future of 10 years..

작성자: 김*지
2025-03-02 183

회원님의 영작문

Q. Would you rather be 10 years younger than you are now, or 10 years older?
A. I will choose 10 years younger. I studied to be a police officer, but i failed the exam.
because of problem of healthy, the exam period.
If i can back to past 10 years, i will study harder and longer.
I'm working in company, sometimes, i think about police officer.
Come to think of it, my job of dream..!
Actually, i have a friend that is police officer. I studied with her at same time.
She is very hard time during duty. Because of civil petitioner.
So, she often tell me not to study exam again. and police officer has a poor wages.
Despite her advice and experience of fail, i often think about it, someday i might study..!
And then, i will pass the exam.

p.s: About our class
I chose the class "free talking" at first, but i felt a little hard step for me.
So i want to change category.
"Senior Upper Beginner 1"that my level test is recommendation step..!!
Is it possible?

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Good evening, Min Ji!^^

Youth advantages include energy, time, optimism, and independence.

Being young has some advantages that can make this stage of life highly rewarding and exciting: Energy and Vitality: Young people often have more physical energy and resilience, allowing them to participate in a range of activities, explore new hobbies, and recover quickly from exertion.

Thank you for answering your homework. See you tomorrow!

__T. Mayleen :)


I will choose 10 years younger. I studied to be a police officer, but i failed the exam.
because of problem of healthy, the exam period.
>>> I would choose to be 10 years younger. I studied to be a police officer, but I failed the exam because of a health problem during the exam period.

If i can back to past 10 years, i will study harder and longer.
I'm working in company, sometimes, i think about police officer.
Come to think of it, my job of dream..!
>>> If I could go back to the past 10 years, I would study harder and longer.
I work in a company, and sometimes, I think about being a police officer.
Come to think of it, it was my dream job!

Actually, i have a friend that is police officer. I studied with her at same time.
>>> Actually, I have a friend who is a police officer. I studied with her in the past.
She is very hard time during duty. Because of civil petitioner.
So, she often tell me not to study exam again. and police officer has a poor wages.
>>> She has a difficult time on duty due of civil petitions.
So she frequently advises me not to study for the exam again. A police officer makes a poor income.
Despite her advice and experience of fail, i often think about it, someday i might study..!
And then, i will pass the exam.
>>> Despite her advice and experiences of failure, I still think that someday I will study hard, and then I will pass the exam.

p.s: About our class
I chose the class "free talking" at first, but i felt a little hard step for me.
So i want to change category.
"Senior Upper Beginner 1"that my level test is recommendation step..!!
Is it possible?
>>> It's about our class.
I chose "free talking" at first, but I felt it was a little hard for me.
So I want to change the course.
"Senior Upper Beginner 1" is my level test recommended textbook.
Is it possible?
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