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What characteristics have you inherited from your parents? Do you look like them? Do you behave like

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One typical thing that I inherited from my mom is keen senses. These keen senses help me to understand situations or ordeals that I face quickly, so I can think of strategies to figure them out fast. However, I have physically keen sense either, so that although I know how to deal with faced circumstances it's stressful to change myself to fit into solutions. Fortunately, I feel like physical keen sense can become dull by practice. I feel like I'm getting less stress when I repeat the things that bothered me before.
Other thing that I inherited from my dad is a bad eye sight. My dad has 'extremely' bad eye sight but thanks to my mom who doesn't wear glasses, my eye sight is not extremely but 'fairly' bad. When I was in elementary school I thought having a bad sight was cool because I could wear glasses legitimately and thought wearing glasses made me look smarter. But these days I can't understand past me. The fact that I can't live a normal life without glasses annoys me often.

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Hello, Ms. Woo In! It sounds like you've inherited some unique traits from both of your parents, and you've learned a lot about how they impact you over time. Thank you for sharing!
-T. Sonny
One typical thing that I inherited from my mom is keen senses. 
>>Correct!
These keen senses help me to understand situations or ordeals that I face quickly, so I can think of strategies to figure them out fast. 
>>These keen senses help me understand situations or challenges that I face quickly, so I can think of strategies to solve them fast.

However, I have physically keen sense either, so that although I know how to deal with faced circumstances it's stressful to change myself to fit into solutions. 
>>However, I don't have a physically keen sense, either. Although I know how to deal with the situations I encounter, it’s stressful to adjust myself to fit the solutions.
Fortunately, I feel like physical keen sense can become dull by practice. 
>>Fortunately, I feel like a physically keen sense can become less acute with practice.
I feel like I'm getting less stress when I repeat the things that bothered me before.
>>I find that I feel less stressed when I repeat the things that once bothered me.
Other thing that I inherited from my dad is a bad eye sight. 
>>Another thing I inherited from my dad is poor eyesight.

My dad has 'extremely' bad eye sight but thanks to my mom who doesn't wear glasses, my eye sight is not extremely but 'fairly' bad. 
>>My dad has extremely bad eyesight, but thanks to my mom, who doesn’t wear glasses, my eyesight isn’t extremely bad—just fairly poor.

When I was in elementary school I thought having a bad sight was cool because I could wear glasses legitimately and thought wearing glasses made me look smarter. 
>>When I was in elementary school, I thought having bad eyesight was cool because it meant I could wear glasses legitimately, and I believed wearing glasses made me look smarter.

But these days I can't understand past me. 
>>But these days, I can’t understand my past self.

The fact that I can't live a normal life without glasses annoys me often.
>>Correct!
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