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What is a goal that you¡¯ve recently achieved?

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What is a goal that you¡¯ve recently achieved?

It¡¯s a tough question to answer. People usually set goals for themselves in the new year. I also set goals recently, my challenge is currently ongoing. So far, I am working on several challenges.
First, I am reading bible 5chapters every day. My goal is to read the whole bible, starting from ¡®Genesis¡¯ to ¡®Revelation.¡¯ It¡¯s tough and sometimes it¡¯s boring. However, I¡¯ve been reading continuously and have never piled up. Now I am reading ¡®Deuteronomy.¡¯
Second, I want to achieve ¡®Ophic¡¯ AL degree, which is difficult and already tried twice. Now, I have no idea how to solve this problem. I¡¯ve been considering new ways of studying or methods.
Finally, my most challenging goal is to become 70kg. I just weigh the weight; I am now 64.75kg. I once, weighed 67.8kg, which was my highest weight ever. I failed last year, but my challenge won¡¯t be over.
After 6months please ask me this question again. Let¡¯s see what goals will be achieved.

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Hi, Diego!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. You really did well! :)
~ T. Camille

It¡¯s a tough question to answer. 
>> CORRECT!
People usually set goals for themselves in the new year. 
>> CORRECT!
I also set goals recently, my challenge is currently ongoing. 
>> CORRECT!
So far, I am working on several challenges.
>> CORRECT!
First, I am reading bible 5 chapters every day. 
>> First, I am reading the bible 5 chapters every day. 
My goal is to read the whole bible, starting from ¡®Genesis¡¯ to ¡®Revelation.¡¯ 
>> CORRECT!
It¡¯s tough and sometimes it¡¯s boring. 
>> CORRECT!
However, I¡¯ve been reading continuously and have never piled up. 
>> CORRECT!
Now I am reading ¡®Deuteronomy.¡¯
>> CORRECT!
Second, I want to achieve ¡®Ophic¡¯ AL degree, which is difficult and already tried twice. 
>> Second, I want to achieve ¡®OPIC-AL degree, which is difficult and I already tried it twice. 
Now, I have no idea how to solve this problem. 
>> CORRECT!
I¡¯ve been considering new ways of studying or methods.
>> I¡¯ve been considering new ways or methods of studying.
Finally, my most challenging goal is to become 70kg. 
>> CORRECT!
I just weigh the weight; I am now 64.75kg. 
>> CORRECT!
I once, weighed 67.8kg, which was my highest weight ever. 
>> I once, weighed 67.8kg, which was my highest weight ever. 
I failed last year, but my challenge won¡¯t be over.
>> CORRECT!
After 6months please ask me this question again. 
>> CORRECT!
Let¡¯s see what goals will be achieved.
>> CORRECT!

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