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Writing Task: How do you think others perceive you, and how does that compare to how you see yourself?

what can I say that...the word,,, other people evaluation?
anyway, I think almost people think that I am a extroverted person.
Because I hate unfamiliar mood like nobody say something.. I mean the condition in silence.
So actually I don't need to say something, but I'm too much talker almost every situation.especially when there are newcomers.
So most of people heard about my mbit is isfj are surprised and deny my mbti. and they say "do not lie~ You are 100 percent E person."
actually, I want to make the atmosphere smooth, so that I use a lot of energy to say anything.
To be honest, I need time and rest alone. I have to charge energy for talk to other person.

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Hello there, Alice! 

Have you heard ambivert? 
Ambivert is a person who exhibits traits of both introvert and extrovert. This means they can be social and enjoy being around people, but also need alone time to recharge, depending on the situation. 

Thank you for doing your homework!

- Kristine ^^ 

what can I say that...the word,,, other people evaluation?
>> What can I say about other people's evaluations?
anyway, I think almost people think that I am a extroverted person.
>> Anyway, I think most people believe that I am an extroverted person.
Because I hate unfamiliar mood like nobody say something.. I mean the condition in silence.
>> Because I hate unfamiliar situations where no one is saying anything, like when it's completely silent.
So actually I don't need to say something, but I'm too much talker almost every situation.especially when there are newcomers.
>> Actually, I don't need to say anything, but I talk too much in almost every situation—especially when there are newcomers.
So most of people heard about my mbit is isfj are surprised and deny my mbti. and they say "do not lie~ You are 100 percent E person."
>> So, most people who hear that my MBTI is ISFJ are surprised and deny it. They say, "Don't lie~ You are 100 percent an E person."
actually, I want to make the atmosphere smooth, so that I use a lot of energy to say anything.
>> I just want to make a comfortable atmosphere, so I use a lot of energy to keep the conversation going.
To be honest, I need time and rest alone. I have to charge energy for talk to other person.
>> To be honest, I need time alone to rest. I have to recharge my energy before talking to others.
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