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서비스 입니다.

Talk about an unforgettable experience on a public transportation.

작성자: 박*호
2025-02-27 160

회원님의 영작문

It happened when i started my career in the early of 1990s.
It was a very embrassing thing to me
I lived in a suburb city 1 hour away by the bus from Seoul where I worked.
at that time, I worked from 7am to 9pm for Hyundai Motors in Seoul and after work, my co-workers and I used to drink a lot until midnight almost everyday and come home by a bus.
Then one day, as usual, I woke up to the voice of the bus driver waking me up while I was coming home by the bus after drinking with my colleagues after work.
When I woke up, I was alone on the bus. and the time was around 1 a.m.
I was drunk and asleep, so I didn't know until the bus passed by my house and arrived at the last bus stop.
I had to take a taxi to come home because it was in the middle of the night and no bus was running anymore.
In fact, this happening was very common at the time and it happened frequently to my colleagues as well.
It was very shameful and embarrassing, but I miss those days now.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Soon Ho^^
Woah! That was intense if it happened multiple times. 
It's kind of like a dangerous situation though. 
_T. SHAY^^
***
It happened when i started my career in the early of 1990s.
>>It happened when I started my career in the early 90s.
OR: It happened years ago when I was just starting to build my career.
It was a very embrassing thing to me
>>It was a very embarrassing thing to me.
OR: It was a shameful thing.
I lived in a suburb city 1 hour away by the bus from Seoul where I worked.
>>I lived in the suburbs which is one hour away by bus from Seoul where I worked.
at that time, I worked from 7am to 9pm for Hyundai Motors in Seoul and after work, my co-workers and I used to drink a lot until midnight almost everyday and come home by a bus.
>>At that time, I worked from 7am to 9pm for Hyundai Motors in Seoul and after work, my co-workers and I used to drink a lot until midnight almost every day and go home by bus.
Then one day, as usual, I woke up to the voice of the bus driver waking me up while I was coming home by the bus after drinking with my colleagues after work.
>>Then one day, as usual, I woke up to the voice of the bus driver waking me up while I was sleeping.
When I woke up, I was alone on the bus. and the time was around 1 a.m.
>>When I woke up, I was alone on the bus and the time was around 1 a.m.
I was drunk and asleep, so I didn't know until the bus passed by my house and arrived at the last bus stop.
>>I was drunk and asleep, so I didn't know the bus had already passed by my house and arrived at the last bus stop.
OR: I was drunk, and I fell asleep, so I didn't know we already passed by my house. 
I had to take a taxi to come home because it was in the middle of the night and no bus was running anymore.
>>I had to take a taxi home because it was in the middle of the night and no bus was operating anymore.
In fact, this happening was very common at the time and it happened frequently to my colleagues as well.
>>In fact, this happening was very common at that time, and it happened frequently to my colleagues as well.
OR: To be honest, it's a common thing among company workers during that time specifically male workers.
It was very shameful and embarrassing, but I miss those days now.
>>Correct
OR: It was very shameful and embarrassing, but as I look back, it makes me miss those days.

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