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It is a very unfortunate accident because it was caused by human error not a natural disaster.

I attribute to Yoon president's incompetence and corruption.

In fact, many terrible accidents were occurred in this government.

He let people depress and lethargic.

Corrupted leaders occur social disasters.

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Ms. Lily!
I understand your sentiments especially if we rely on our leaders. 
We hope that the head of the nation works like a real civil servant and we will be devastated if they fail to do so. Let's hope that your country and other countries of he world will be able to move on and live a productive life in all aspects.
Aki~

It is a very unfortunate accident because it was caused by human error, not a natural disaster.
>>>  CORRECT!

I attribute to Yoon president's incompetence and corruption.
>>> I attribute to the Yoon president's incompetence and corruption.

In fact, many terrible accidents were occurred in this government.
>>> In fact, many terrible accidents have occurred in this government.

He let people depress and lethargic.
>>> He made the people feel depressed and lethargic.

Corrupted leaders occur social disasters.
>>> Corrupted leaders occur in social disasters.
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