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When I failed to follow plans

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If I'm not able to follow an important plan for day, I try to follow rest of plans. The worst result happens when I ruin whole plans because of one plan. Therefore even though I failed to follow important plan, I will do my best to cover it up with other plans. If it happens, it makes me frustrated and upset. It especially feels really bad when the day is over and I lied on the bed at midnight.

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Hello, Ha Eun!

That's a good idea that even if you can't finish all of your plans for the day, you tried your best to do some of it.
~Teacher Jess

If I'm not able to follow an important plan for day, I try to follow rest of plans. 
>>If I'm not able to follow an important plan for the day, I try to follow the rest of my plans.

The worst result happens when I ruin whole plans because of one plan. 
>> The worst result happens when I ruin all my plans because of one plan.

Therefore even though I failed to follow important plan, I will do my best to cover it up with other plans. 
>> Therefore, even if I fail to follow an important plan, I will do my best to cover it up with other plans.

If it happens, it makes me frustrated and upset. 
>> If it happens, it makes me feel frustrated and upset.

It especially feels really bad when the day is over and I lied on the bed at midnight.
>> It especially feels bad when the day is over, and I'm lying in bed at midnight.
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